tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6310813003731345999.post6156014924881349965..comments2018-12-03T12:26:44.754-08:00Comments on San Kyaw : PechaflickrPBS Bloggershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17718158506607083303noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6310813003731345999.post-36229219119387819542018-08-19T14:38:12.114-07:002018-08-19T14:38:12.114-07:00Hey San Kyaw, What a fantastic piece of Narrative ...Hey San Kyaw, What a fantastic piece of Narrative Writing you have done here. My favorite verse of your piece of Writing is the fourth paragraph. That paragraph has a lot of comedy in it. I like the way you described the fourth paragraph because you have used interesting words. Next time you can add more comedy in your piece of Writing. You did a great job San Kyaw. Juniorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02502159484644860216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6310813003731345999.post-76129480975118611902018-08-19T14:38:09.956-07:002018-08-19T14:38:09.956-07:00What an awesome description of your writing San ky...What an awesome description of your writing San kyaw. what an clear picture in my mind my part of the story i liked was that you wouldn't mentioned it again we didn't want to meet the people wrapped in toilet paper again. was this activity easy for you.Dallashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11525197386904492536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6310813003731345999.post-41227888921619715702018-08-19T14:38:01.874-07:002018-08-19T14:38:01.874-07:00I think this is the amazing writing work. My favor...I think this is the amazing writing work. My favorite part of the paragraph is that 'things shaped as people but wrapped up as toilet paper' because instead of saying mammy it is more imaginative. Does images help you to write a story more easier? Keep up your fantastic work! :)Mikihirohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09533742096575484259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6310813003731345999.post-90074500417906425702018-08-19T14:37:55.135-07:002018-08-19T14:37:55.135-07:00Hey San Kyaw, what a fantastic writing. I really l...Hey San Kyaw, what a fantastic writing. I really liked the way you wrote 'We leaped into the light blue orb' it made a clear picture on my mind. Your paragraphs links together and your images matches the story. Does linking each paragraphs easy? Great job San Kyaw. Joshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12711450902396425336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6310813003731345999.post-53180769583804416292018-08-19T14:37:30.559-07:002018-08-19T14:37:30.559-07:00Thank you Mrs Anderson for the comment. My favorit...Thank you Mrs Anderson for the comment. My favorite part of this activity was communicating with Kanye, because he came up with great ideas for the paragraphs. San kyawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05562544378330831324noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6310813003731345999.post-70154421379557791912018-08-19T14:36:59.777-07:002018-08-19T14:36:59.777-07:00This is a really good pechaflickr you have created...This is a really good pechaflickr you have created San Kyaw. As we looked around searching for a way to navigate ourselfs to safety I really enjoyed how you used powerful words to hook your audience in. What did you most enjoy about doing this activity? Good work keep it up!Joshuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00682535641399500333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6310813003731345999.post-13719458719458451702018-08-19T14:36:03.083-07:002018-08-19T14:36:03.083-07:00Nice Job San Kyaw and Kanye. This is a really good...Nice Job San Kyaw and Kanye. This is a really good story to choose, I like how you linked your sentence and made your sentence make scenes. My favourite part of the PechaFlikr is the first paragraph. Was this easy for you to do and write?<br />Great work <br />JoshuaJoshua Vilikokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15207872282943423338noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6310813003731345999.post-1328778871707009332018-08-19T14:31:07.212-07:002018-08-19T14:31:07.212-07:00What a fabulous piece of writing San Kyaw and Kany...What a fabulous piece of writing San Kyaw and Kanye. 'They stared at us like their eyes were feasting on our souls' is a really powerful description that paints a clear picture in my mind. I am really pleased to see the links between your paragraphs as this helps your petchaflickr story to flow. What was your favourite part of this activity? Superb collaboration boys :)Robyn Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13556075713573467958noreply@blogger.com