This week for writing we learnt about Pechaflickr. My partner Kanye and I created a google slide to put our images, and a google drawing for our planing. For our planing we needed to link our ideas to each other so they made sense. We also needed to describe what was happening in the pictures. I enjoyed creating a Pechaflickr because it was really challenging. The thing that challenged me the most was finding the image that matched the correct sentence.
What a fabulous piece of writing San Kyaw and Kanye. 'They stared at us like their eyes were feasting on our souls' is a really powerful description that paints a clear picture in my mind. I am really pleased to see the links between your paragraphs as this helps your petchaflickr story to flow. What was your favourite part of this activity? Superb collaboration boys :)
ReplyDeleteNice Job San Kyaw and Kanye. This is a really good story to choose, I like how you linked your sentence and made your sentence make scenes. My favourite part of the PechaFlikr is the first paragraph. Was this easy for you to do and write?
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Joshua
This is a really good pechaflickr you have created San Kyaw. As we looked around searching for a way to navigate ourselfs to safety I really enjoyed how you used powerful words to hook your audience in. What did you most enjoy about doing this activity? Good work keep it up!
ReplyDeleteThank you Mrs Anderson for the comment. My favorite part of this activity was communicating with Kanye, because he came up with great ideas for the paragraphs.
ReplyDeleteHey San Kyaw, what a fantastic writing. I really liked the way you wrote 'We leaped into the light blue orb' it made a clear picture on my mind. Your paragraphs links together and your images matches the story. Does linking each paragraphs easy? Great job San Kyaw.
ReplyDeleteI think this is the amazing writing work. My favorite part of the paragraph is that 'things shaped as people but wrapped up as toilet paper' because instead of saying mammy it is more imaginative. Does images help you to write a story more easier? Keep up your fantastic work! :)
ReplyDeleteWhat an awesome description of your writing San kyaw. what an clear picture in my mind my part of the story i liked was that you wouldn't mentioned it again we didn't want to meet the people wrapped in toilet paper again. was this activity easy for you.
ReplyDeleteHey San Kyaw, What a fantastic piece of Narrative Writing you have done here. My favorite verse of your piece of Writing is the fourth paragraph. That paragraph has a lot of comedy in it. I like the way you described the fourth paragraph because you have used interesting words. Next time you can add more comedy in your piece of Writing. You did a great job San Kyaw.
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